Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Excerpt from INDIGO

"She’d introduced herself as Chris but Joe preferred her full name, Christianna. It was a somewhat unusual name, simultaneously spiritual and earthy. He liked the way it sounded in his mind. It flowed through his consciousness as if it were a thought that belonged there, that was supposed to have been spoken by him at some point in his life, meant to flow through his lips and hang in the air a moment, sweet, uncommon, special.

“We have to go Christianna” he said, her name on his lips as sweet as it had sounded in his mind. Recoiling at his use of her full name, she hesitated for a moment, then felt unexpected pleasure. For the first time, her name sounded beautiful to her."





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2 comments:

Double-Dolphin said...

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!! That's all I can say in response to that excerpt.

Breeze said...

Is that a good OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH or a bad OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH?

Breeze